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Close your eyes and dream.
Tomorrow will be different,
So for now spread your wings
And fly high in the distance.
Don't let the past get in your way,
It can't hurt you now.
The future will be here some day,
But no need to worry right now.
For now just fly away,
It will all be better one day.
Tomorrow will be different,
So for now spread your wings
And fly high in the distance.
Don't let the past get in your way,
It can't hurt you now.
The future will be here some day,
But no need to worry right now.
For now just fly away,
It will all be better one day.
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Any mistakes or anything please tell me! 
I've got this problem with my poems... I feel like I use way to simple words
What do you get from it?
Anything you don't like?
How can I make it better?
Basically.. Do you like it
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I've got this problem with my poems... I feel like I use way to simple words
What do you get from it?
Anything you don't like?
How can I make it better?
Basically.. Do you like it
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:iconggimmefeedback: I really like it. The piece has such a positive message it brought a smile to my face. Simplicity is never a bad thing. People pay others to make things simplier for them. 